A deep dive into your manuscript that uncovers what’s working, what’s not, and what to do next.
You’ve written “The End” (maybe more than once), but deep down, you know the story still isn’t landing the way it could. You’re too close to see what’s missing. Too inside the forest to spot the trees—or the path through them.
This isn’t about word choice. It’s about story choice. Structure, character arcs, pacing, emotional resonance, world logic, genre expectations—the big stuff that makes or breaks a novel.
That’s where I come in.
What You’ll Get:
- A comprehensive editorial letter
→ 6–10 pages of thoughtful, constructive, big-picture feedback on your story’s structure, pacing, characters, stakes, theme, genre alignment, and more - Comments in the manuscript
→ Focused, strategic observations and questions to guide your thinking without overwhelming you - A 90-minute Zoom call to talk it all through
→ You’ll get a clear sense of where your story stands, where it wants to go, and how to get there - Next steps for your revision
→ A personalised path forward, so you don’t just get feedback—you get traction - Tools and strategies for approaching revision
→ Whether you’re a meticulous planner or a fearless rewriter, you’ll leave with resources that match your process - Additional exercises or resources
→ Sent when relevant, to help you deepen your characters, themes, or story arcs
How It Works:
You submit your full manuscript (standard formatting, Word doc) I read it closely and prepare your editorial letter + margin comments. We meet for your 90-minute coaching call to unpack the feedback and explore next steps. You walk away with clarity, tools, and a way forward