The main advantage of this package is that you get the feedback needed for revision as well as my support and guidance to implement it. This package includes:

• Personalised in-line feedback on two (2) bi-weekly submissions of up to twenty (20) pages (standard manuscript formatting) a month
• A detailed editorial letter for each submission, highlighting your main strengths and challenges with clear and actionable next steps.
• A 45-minute coaching call on Zoom after each editorial session to discuss the feedback (2 calls/month)
• Additional resources and exercises (when applicable) to help you pin down your story and develop your characters
• A partner who will encourage, support and challenge you in writing the best story possible