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Check Your Story Pulse

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Short Story Editorial Review

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Editorial clarity for stories that stay with readers.

You’ve written a short story that almost works, but something’s missing. Maybe the pacing dips, the emotional thread feels off, or the ending doesn’t land the way you want.

Short Story Editorial Review offers detailed, constructive editorial feedback from an award-winning short story writer. This way you’ll know exactly what’s working, what’s not, and how to turn a promising draft into a story that lingers. This offer is valid for short stories up to 5000 words. For longer stories, please get in touch for a custom quote.

What you’ll get:

A detailed 2–3 page editorial letter grounded in the Short Story Blueprint framework (derived from Jennie Nash’s Blueprint for a Book method), analysing structure, characters and emotional resonance
In-line comments highlighting what supports or weakens your story’s impact
Clear next steps for your revision
A 40-minute Zoom coaching call to discuss feedback, questions, and next steps.

Who it's for:

Writers preparing short stories for competitions or publication.
Authors who’ve revised several times but can’t see what’s missing.
Creatives who want honest, encouraging editorial insight without losing their voice.
Writers seeking clarity before submitting or expanding a piece into a collection.

Who it's not for:

First-draft stories that haven’t been revised at all.
Writers looking for copyediting or proofreading only.
Those who want line-by-line rewrite coaching or ghost editing.
Novelists seeking feedback on longer works (see coaching or developmental edit offers instead).

I work best with curious, committed writers who want their stories to resonate and who aren’t afraid to dig deeper.

Availability:

Limited monthly slots (maximum of 2 stories per month) to ensure in-depth, personalised feedback. Bookings typically fill 2 - 3 weeks in advance - early reservation recommended.

The process:

1

Request the service

Click the button below to fill in a short form about your project. I’ll review it and get back to you within 1–2 working days with payment details.

2

You pay the invoice and submit materials

After I receive the payment, I’ll send you the Short Story Blueprint materials. You’ll fill them in and submit them along with your short story (up to 5000 words) - all as Word documents.

3

Receive feedback

You’ll receive your detailed editorial letter and in-line notes according to the agreed timeline, along with an invitation to book your Zoom call.

4

Zoom call

During a 40-minute call, we’ll discuss your feedback, next steps, and any questions or concerns you may have about revision or submissions.

Your investment:

USD 199

One-time payment

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