Get the big-picture clarity your story deserves right from the first line.

You’ve polished your opening pages so many times they practically sparkle. But deep down, you’re wondering if they’re pulling their weight.

Will the readers care about your protagonist? Did you start the story at the right place?

Your opening doesn’t just set the tone. It decides whether readers (or agents or editors) keep turning the pages. In other words – your opening pages are your prime real estate. You’ll want it to dazzle the readers and lure them into the world you’ve created. And surface-level fixes won’t cut it when what you really need is a powerful engine that purrs on page one.

That’s where I come in.

What You’ll Get:

• A developmental edit (not just line edits) of your first 3000 words (standard manuscript format)
• A 45-minute coaching call on Zoom to discuss your feedback and next steps
• Big-picture insight into what’s working, what’s unclear, and what’s worth rethinking
• Clear, actionable suggestions to strengthen character connection, narrative drive, and story promise
• An editorial letter plus in-line comments, so you’re not left guessing what to do next or how to do it
• Additional resources or exercises (when applicable) to help you enrich your story, deepen your characters, and keep your momentum

How it works

You send me your pages (up to 3000 words, double-spaced, 12-pt font). I review your work with a developmental editor’s lens with a clear focus on the story mechanics. You walk away with clarity, direction, and practical next steps.